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The layout of the stars. When I look at the stars what I see is three lines and the lines are diagonal and that makes them very interesting and they're not incredibly noticeable because the focus is on the planet, but stars don't line up.
The composition. I think the planet is too far in the center. I've gotten to the point where I almost automatically hate anything in the center. Ask anyone I've ever given advice on art. I think that a little bit of cropping on the right side would make this picture very interesting in terms of the planet's placement.
The moon. The last point I'm going to make is a very small detail, but it seemed to really stand out and I don't think it is suppose to. The small moon near the sun. I'm not entirely sure why it bothers me but I think it's because the foreground is the only place with light colors in the larger chunks, so despite the fact that the stars are light, the moon is a larger chunk of lighter color making it feel like it's more forward than I think you intended so I think moving it a little (a really little) bit further out and darkening it would fix that.
This is me being nit-picky and this piece is still a fantastic piece. :3
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